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Past or Present? Hmm..
So I’ve reached a dilemma. Now that I know people like my story, the characters, and places, I can’t figure out if I should continue the story of the main protagonist or delve into the mysterious past. The past would center its focus around Lucian the hero, and Vanyir the warlord.
But what will readers like more? Will they enjoy the continuing story, or would they rather learn more about what happened in the past?
Such a hard decision!! I would love some feedback from those who have read my book. I’m writing bits and pieces of both stories, just in case. For now, though, I’m stumped.
I almost feel like I want to write the past, just to reveal the storyline more, so readers can understand the characters better.
Anyway, my proof is fully edited (as well as the e-book copies) and now ready to print!
Happy days, people, happy days.
Later!
~ Sandra
Prologue of New Story
She spoke to the King, hoping he would forbid his son to go, but he said: “Well, dear, it’s true that adventures are good for people even when they are very young. Adventures can get into a person’s blood even if he doesn’t remember having them.”
- Eva Ibbotson, “Secret of Platform 13″
Good afternoon everyone. Today I am going to share with you the prologue of my new story (which doesn’t have a name yet, I’m afraid). It’s a short excerpt, but I quite like it. Take a look and enjoy!
Prologue
Once, long ago, the world was a quiet place. Then the Great Wars began and shook the earth. Creatures awoke from the depths, shadows of evil that mortals knew not to exist. The monsters drove all life from the land, turning the earth into a barren wasteland where no green thrived. The weakest of the humans were slain; the strongest were killed in battle; the smartest hid and formed resistances across the land.
Far above the scarred lands below were the floating islands in the clouds. These were home to the Sky People, the Silex. Uncaring of what happened beneath, they watched on as the world grew dull and lifeless, continuing life on their islands as they always had: in peace and solitude. They had never felt the need to aid the heedless humans in their many times of trouble, yet they would very soon come to regret their decision. Like all ignorance, it does not start to fade until it has seen its mistakes.
This is a story of adventure, danger, and above all else, the power to believe in the impossible.

